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Rhyss11
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jun 05, 2010 6:21 pm
I'm just gonna make up some story about all Nintendo crap and real life.....
Characters: Rhyss (Me) Carl (My friend) Darren (Friend) Ryan (Friend) Darragh (Friend) Mario, Luigi, Cloud, Tidus, Bunch of pokemon, Sonic, tails and others,
Okay,
Title: The Epic Adventure. Chapter 1: The chosen ones
One nice sunny day, Rhyss and his friends Carl, Darren and Ryan we're playing their Xbox360's. "Oh yeah just got a 10 streak kill on Battle Field" Said Carl.
"Damn it Carl you faggot you killed me! we're boosting im ment to kill you!" Rhyss replied.
"Sorry, thought it was someone else"
"Right"
"Hey, Ryan kill a couple of people I'm in the mood of killing some cops" Suggested Darren.
"Nah, I really want to do more mission and get achievements" Ryan replied.
Suddenly a small earthquake accoured.
"Holy sh*t, what the hell was that?!?!" Screamed Rhyss
"F*ck my bed broke and my d*ck hurts" Screamed Carl
"What...? Your...d*ck hurts....?" Said Darren
Rhyss ran out his front door.
"Jesus, what the hell is that?"
"what's what?" said carl
"Just look out your door its pretty high..."
Carl looked out his bedroom window.
"Holy f*ck what's that?"
"That's what Rhyss said Carl, and i can see it" Said Darren
"Come on everyone to my house!" said Rhyss
Everyone walked over to Rhyss's house.
"Hiiiiiii Rhyss can you come in the lane for a sec?" Said Holly
"Screw it Holly no i hate you...just because you fancy me" Replied Rhyss
Everyone went into the huge building.
"Hey, What's your name?" Said a strange but familiar voice.
"Is that....Tidus?" Said Rhyss
"Holy crap it is!" Said Carl
"HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Said Mario, Luigi, Cloud, Sonic, Mewtwo, Lucario, Tails.
Rhyss and the others stared then scratched their heads in confusion
"This is a dream right?" They said.
"A dream? no... this is no dream, we are searching for 4 children called Rhyss, Carl, Darren and Ryan.
"Uhh that's us" Replied Rhyss
"Ahh...you are one of the chosen ones" Said a blue spirit.
"I am Zuckio, the Maester of Telecennique a powerful ability, You four must stay still until I preform an action called takiniqu, which will give a strong power to your souls."
"I'm not sure if we'd be up for it" Said Ryan
"Rhyss?" Said Zuckio
"Yeah?"
"Please step forward, I must do something with your hair"
"Okay"
Zuckio took out a steel rod with indescribable markings on it. He started prancing around spinning the rod. "Techa niku thon ma chin titsu" A blinding light blasted from the rod.
Rhyss's hair was diagonally tilted to the left handed side. Also a sword appeared on his back.
"That sword is called a Tactten Buster Sword" announced Zuckio.
He did the same with Carl, Darren and Ryan, but Carl had two Guns called "chaka Pistols", Darren and a magic rod called "Elemental Summoner" and Ryan had a Computer called "Mindal Destruction" which he thought of a type of attack and it would happen.
"Ryan, only a few attacks will happen when you become stronger more will be able to happen" Said Zuckio
"'K..." replied Ryan.
"Now go! your Journey begins!" Announced Zuckio
"Yeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah" Shouted Everyone
End of Part 1.
Next Chapter: The Adventure begins!
Post a reply if you liked this story!
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razor10000
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jun 05, 2010 6:25 pm
sorry, couldn't read because im using internet channel
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Arch7ngel
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jun 05, 2010 9:53 pm
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MissingnoJ
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jun 05, 2010 9:57 pm
"Damn it Carl you faggot you killed me! we're boosting im ment to kill you!" Rhyss replied.
Are you anti-g@y? I only ask because you use faggot as an insult.
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Rhyss11
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jun 06, 2010 1:53 pm
Actually in ireland that's not what like anti-***-ish thingie your talk, my uncles g@y so basically i can't really name g@y because then i would be kinda saying to my uncle
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Rhyss11
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jun 06, 2010 2:26 pm
Chapter 2. The Adventure Begins!
"Ok everyone stand back" shouted Zuckio
A swirly teleporter appeared onto the wall.
"Ok everyone walk into that"
"Wouldn't we just hit the wall?" Asked Carl
"No you ***, it's a teleporter" Replied Darren
Everyone began walking in the teleporter, lastly was Rhyss, Darren, Carl and Ryan
"Ahh, ginger flavoured Beer" Said someone.
Everyone looked at Carl.
"What?"
"Ha...ginger..." Said Lucario
Carl gave Lucario the evil eye.
"POW RIGHT IN THE KISSER"
"Holy raining dog crap, is that Peter Griffin?" Shouted Rhyss
"No, in this teleporter it reads our minds and out thoughts, this is what your thinking, that is why we can hear it" Said Zuckio
"Lalala screw all of you" thinked Rhyss
"Be quiet Rhyss I'm thinking" said Zuckio
"Damn it"
Suddenly around them was green fields.
"what the Censored" said Carl
"Huh?"
"Carl why didn't you just say the curse you were going to say?" asked Ryan
"I-I can't" replied Carl
"Bleh bullcrap dead arm, I'm holding this sword for to long" said Rhyss
A creature jump out from a bush and tried attacking Rhyss. Rhyss's Reflex made him take out his sword and slice off the creatures head.
"What the heck was that" asked Cloud
"Draguar....little pests.." replied Mewtwo
"How'd you know that Mewtwo, your only a Pokemon?" said Darren
"Don't underestimate me" Mewtwo replied
Darren slowly walked backwards
"Leave him Mewtwo, we don't want to screw up" Commanded Zuckio
"Aha! here's my map, everyone take a look" said Zuckio
"We must head North to find the nearest town" He added
"Right shall we split up?" asked Darren
"Yes, if we're all in one group we may all be killed and there will be no hope" said Zuckio
"Ok I'll go with Rhyss, Darren, Carl and Ryan" Said Cloud and Tidus.
"Right" Replied Mewtwo.
Rhyss, Cloud, Tidus, Darren, Carl and Ryan headed north to reach the nearest town.
"I'm hungry" Said Tidus
"Same" added Rhyss
"Shut up, we're almost there.....SH*T 4 FIENDS ATTACK 'EM" shouted Cloud
Rhyss picked up his sword, Ryan concentrated on attacking Cloud and Tidus charged and hem, Darren was trying to cast a spell, but Carl took out his Pistols and shoot all the fiends.
"Damn it Carl you did it again, But this time It's real" said Rhyss
"C'mon we don't have all day" Said Darren
"we don't have all day" mimicked Rhyss
"Shut up" said Darren
After an hour or so, they finally reached the town, it was called Catoblog City.
"Look an Inn, we can stay there for the night, and to wait for the others" said Cloud
They paid for their room, then went off to sleep.
The next morning Rhyss woke up in his house
"Ah...a dream" Said Rhyss
"Rhyss get the f*ck out of bed time for school!" Shouted his Mom
"What? school, those damn pigs, it was a dream....DAMN IT!" Shouted Rhyss
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~End~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That story came from the top of my head.
And MissingnoJ whats up with you and g@y people
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double-b
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jun 06, 2010 2:52 pm
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Arch7ngel
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jun 06, 2010 9:14 pm
Classic image reply from double-b.
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pyro777
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jun 06, 2010 9:28 pm
On 06-05-2010 21:57 pm MissingnoJ wrote:
"Damn it Carl you faggot you killed me! we're boosting im ment to kill you!" Rhyss replied.
Are you anti-g@y? I only ask because you use faggot as an insult. Almost nobody uses "faggot" to mean gaγ anymore.
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 6:51 pm
On 06-06-2010 14:52 pm double-b wrote:

It's called fan fiction. 
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double-b
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jun 07, 2010 6:56 pm
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 7:05 pm
On 06-07-2010 18:56 pm double-b wrote: It's called shît
You mean it's **** in your opinion. In my opinion it's a good read if you're board out of your mind and want something to laugh at.
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Arch7ngel
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jun 07, 2010 7:53 pm
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 7:56 pm
On 06-07-2010 19:53 pm Arch7ngel wrote: Leans more towards fact.
No, it's opinion. Not everyone is Charles Dickens. Personally I think fan-fiction is pretty creative when it comes to plot...and there is a lot of fan-fiction that is a lot better than this, no offense to the author.
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Arch7ngel
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jun 07, 2010 8:00 pm
What. I was talking about double-b's post. You take everything too literally.
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pyro777
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jun 07, 2010 8:08 pm
On 06-07-2010 19:05 pm MissingnoJ wrote:
On 06-07-2010 18:56 pm double-b wrote: It's called shît
You mean it's **** in your opinion. In my opinion it's a good read if you're board out of your mind and want something to laugh at. The only good fan-fiction writer is Peter Chimaera.
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 8:09 pm
On 06-07-2010 20:00 pm Arch7ngel wrote: What. I was talking about double-b's post. You take everything too literally.
 That's true. I have difficulties with stuff like sarcasm and hidden meanings. My mom says it's only because I have High-Functioning Autism, but I just wish I could tell what people ment easier.
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 8:10 pm
On 06-07-2010 20:08 pm pyro777 wrote:
On 06-07-2010 19:05 pm MissingnoJ wrote:
On 06-07-2010 18:56 pm double-b wrote: It's called shît
You mean it's **** in your opinion. In my opinion it's a good read if you're board out of your mind and want something to laugh at. The only good fan-fiction writer is Peter Chimaera.
Again, your mileage may vary.
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pyro777
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jun 07, 2010 8:12 pm
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pyro777
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jun 07, 2010 8:13 pm
On 06-07-2010 20:09 pm MissingnoJ wrote:
On 06-07-2010 20:00 pm Arch7ngel wrote: What. I was talking about double-b's post. You take everything too literally.
That's true. I have difficulties with stuff like sarcasm and hidden meanings. My mom says it's only because I have High-Functioning Autism, but I just wish I could tell what people ment easier. you mean aspergers
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 8:16 pm
On 06-07-2010 20:13 pm pyro777 wrote:
On 06-07-2010 20:09 pm MissingnoJ wrote:
On 06-07-2010 20:00 pm Arch7ngel wrote: What. I was talking about double-b's post. You take everything too literally.
That's true. I have difficulties with stuff like sarcasm and hidden meanings. My mom says it's only because I have High-Functioning Autism, but I just wish I could tell what people ment easier. you mean aspergers
It's not Aspergers Syndrome, it's just a form of High-Functioning Autism. Not everyone with Autism has Aspergers Syndrome.
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pyro777
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jun 07, 2010 8:20 pm
I said that because of your inability to interpret social cues, not because you have High-Functioning Autism.
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MissingnoJ
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jun 07, 2010 8:24 pm
On 06-07-2010 20:20 pm pyro777 wrote: I said that because of your inability to interpret social cues, not because you have High-Functioning Autism.
Oh, thanks for clarifying that.
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pyro777
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jun 07, 2010 8:25 pm
Also, check into Peter Chimaera's writings. They're nearly perfect.
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Arch7ngel
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jun 07, 2010 8:30 pm
I haven't been diagnosed with any kind of disorder(never been checked for any either), so I guess I find it hard to understand how it can be difficult to just not take me so seriously when I say something.
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