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5-Year-Old
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jul 18, 2010 10:37 pm
On 07-18-2010 22:18 pm naruto90 wrote: Naruto90
Name : Troy/Twitch.
Age : 21
Gender : Male
Personality : Outgoing (Likable)
Description : African-american, normal, and is built correctly. Likes to travel, by himeself. People call him Twitch. Reason why? No one knows....
Job : Mercenary (Idk, Copied Chase)
Weapons usually used : M14 EBR Sniper Rifle (standard), Mini-Uzi (primary), Desert Eagle and Knife (secondary).
Writing Sample : None.
Picture? Looking for one still
We aren't writing out the form yet. And you got weapon slots all messed up.
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VicariousReality
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jul 18, 2010 11:08 pm
additionally, you need to be more descriptive with appearance and personality., You won't be allowed to RP unless you add a Sample and the weapons don't fit the RP.
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VicariousReality
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jul 18, 2010 11:09 pm
On 07-18-2010 16:40 pm 5-Year-Old wrote: Here's my improved form (much of it is taken from my canceled project "After Effect"). (This stuff about my character is still unofficial and not final yet.)
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5-Year-Old
Name : Chase/C.J.
Age : 27
Gender : Male
Personality : Optimistic
Description : It's evident on his face that he's mostly grown up with war. Has an armory hidden somewhere that contains all kinds of recovered weapons. Is generally quite tough due to having found a rare and very powerful armor along his travels.
Job : Mercenary
Weapons usually used : Machete (standard), SVD Dragunov (primary), Mac-10 (secondary) and RPG-7 (special).
Writing Sample : None.
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Job is what you are. Weapons: The standard weapon slot is for normally melee or blade type weapons like swords. The primary weapon slot is for an assault weapon like a sniper, a shotgun, an assault rifle or submachine gun. The secondary slot is for grenade launchers, IEDs, pistols and machine pistols. The special weapon slot is for the big and dangerous gun such as explosive ones (mortars, RPGs) and machine guns. Picture has to be be 80x80, 90x90 or 100x100.
Yeah, your crazy @ss creation that no one knew how in the hell it would work.
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VicariousReality
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jul 18, 2010 11:44 pm
Improved Form.
All is required. DON'T DO IT YET.
-Basics-
Name: (If you don't know this, just go away.)
Age: (Not too young, yet not as higher than 21.)
Appearance: (Basic Look. Shirt and pants.)
Personality: (Be descriptive.)
Backstory: (The story of your character before the stories setting. BE ORIGINAL, and average.)
-Inventory-
(Reminder that this is starting, and this is a story and is expansive throughout it.)
Weapon Slot 1: (Something a regular person can find. I.E: Sports rifle in a Sporting goods store.)
Weapon Slot 2: (Same story as above)
Melee: (A melee weapon. Can be as simple as a plank with a railroad spike run through it.)
Other items: (Separated by paragraph. Items such as hats, coats, shoes, matches, medkits, watch, radio, etc.
Hows that?
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naruto90
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jul 19, 2010 12:02 am
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VicariousReality
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jul 19, 2010 12:06 am
On 07-19-2010 00:02 am naruto90 wrote: Whatever
huh?
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5-Year-Old
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jul 19, 2010 1:28 am
On 07-18-2010 23:44 pm VicariousReality wrote: Improved Form.
All is required. DON'T DO IT YET.
-Basics-
Name: (If you don't know this, just go away.)
Age: (Not too young, yet not as higher than 21.)
Appearance: (Basic Look. Shirt and pants.)
Personality: (Be descriptive.)
Backstory: (The story of your character before the stories setting. BE ORIGINAL, and average.)
-Inventory-
(Reminder that this is starting, and this is a story and is expansive throughout it.)
Weapon Slot 1: (Something a regular person can find. I.E: Sports rifle in a Sporting goods store.)
Weapon Slot 2: (Same story as above)
Melee: (A melee weapon. Can be as simple as a plank with a railroad spike run through it.)
Other items: (Separated by paragraph. Items such as hats, coats, shoes, matches, medkits, watch, radio, etc.
Hows that?
Not bad.
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VicariousReality
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jul 19, 2010 11:00 am
Ill have a example once we get the story straight. You got anything chase along the lines of mine?
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naruto90
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jul 19, 2010 1:03 pm
Alright, tell us when to make guy again.
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VicariousReality
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jul 20, 2010 10:57 am
On 07-19-2010 13:03 pm naruto90 wrote: Alright, tell us when to make guy again.
huh?
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VicariousReality
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jul 21, 2010 12:49 pm
Here is my example form.
-Basics-
Name: Murph Epita Temporis
Age: 16
Appearance: Has green eyes and greasy brown hair that runs down to the edge of his nose. He isn't muscular in any way and wears a green shirt with the sleeves torn off to give the look of a T-shirt. His jeans are light blue with a few tears near the knees that run down to his old white and black sneakers. On top of his "T-shirt" he bears a black vest with few pockets.
Personality: Outgoing to other people and only hates people who think and brag they great at something they are not. He doesn't reacts well to surprises and get jealous often.
Backstory: (We haven't set the story in stone yet.)
-Inventory-
Weapon Slot 1: A gas powered, Glock replica pellet gun found at a sporting goods shop.
Weapon Slot 2: A Remington 870 slung over his back.
Melee: A butterfly knife that he bought off of a friend back when he was in eighth grade.
Other items:
~In Backpack~
-A gas mask with one NATO detachable filter.
-A mp3 with radio capabilities.
-Car power jack to create a plug socket.
-Electrical tape.
-Scissors.
-A medical kit.
-Assorted batteries.
~In Pockets and Vest~
-A light blue BIC lighter.
-A small flashlight.
-A cell phone with no service.
-Small amount of cash.
~Equipped~
-A light gray fleece hoodie left unzipped to allow vest access.
-A watch.
-Aviator goggles hanging around his neck.
-Hobo gloves.
RP Sample:
Peter stepped onto the cold, wet floor that seemed to break his soul as the cuts on his feet felt stabbed by the icy water that filled the room only a inch up. Peter breathed slowly to try and ease the pain, but could not hold back his tears.
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5-Year-Old
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jul 21, 2010 4:24 pm
I like but I guess ~In Pockets~ and such should be optional. Or perhaps just split it into two (for Other items).
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Also, an MP3 would not work unless you got it running somehow. And radio would only be able if someone got it working. Not easy. Flashlight would probably work if it had good, clean batteries.
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VicariousReality
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jul 21, 2010 10:10 pm
On 07-21-2010 16:24 pm 5-Year-Old wrote: I like but I guess ~In Pockets~ and such should be optional. Or perhaps just split it into two (for Other items).
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Also, an MP3 would not work unless you got it running somehow. And radio would only be able if someone got it working. Not easy. Flashlight would probably work if it had good, clean batteries.
yeah. just a example. Such as if you were hoping for someone out there broadcasting. And there are radio/flashlights out there that are wind up power.
Alos, this was just a example.
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razor10000
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jul 23, 2010 3:08 am
i dont know what this is all about.
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VicariousReality
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jul 23, 2010 9:30 pm
On 07-23-2010 03:08 am razor10000 wrote: i dont know what this is all about.
Trying to make a simple role play.
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razor10000
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jul 23, 2010 10:54 pm
On 07-23-2010 21:30 pm VicariousReality wrote:
On 07-23-2010 03:08 am razor10000 wrote: i dont know what this is all about.
Trying to make a simple role play.
Well ok, but all this stuff seems complicated to me.
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VicariousReality
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jul 24, 2010 10:47 am
Ok Sorry. I admit, I am making it seem like that. just wait til the actual Rp thread comes out
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razor10000
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jul 24, 2010 5:37 pm
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VicariousReality
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jul 24, 2010 6:05 pm
Yeah. This is just for finding out if people would do it and figuring out my ideas for it.
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razor10000
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jul 24, 2010 6:12 pm
Cool. So when is that new thread coming?
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razor10000
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jul 24, 2010 6:15 pm
Got 2 go. See ya later Murph........
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